since i have a problem with the reasoning in this book.
i thought perhaps it would be a good exercise for me to attempt
a kind of mini rewrite in blog style.
it might help in some way for me to do it.
though i don’t want to do it in a way of comparison. because
i don’t plan to talk about the work as it is now, at all. i am only
planning to use it as a starting point.
i would like to see the ideas in a new light, and what happens in