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i saw the figure
in a rose coloured gown
rocking
on the porch at dawn
buried in a hard bound book
back bent
as if the words were to heavy
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i saw the figure
in a rose coloured gown
rocking
on the porch at dawn
buried in a hard bound book
back bent
as if the words were to heavy
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very vivid imagery … in both yours and Maureen’s.
thanks, susan. the may play forces me to start from a different place and still find my way home.
Excellent alliteration and a nice play on words being “too heavy”. You did well with and by my words! Like the image, too.
i left my link at tweetspeak, and while there i noticed in the comment section that there were many responses, though i didn’t stop to read. It is good to see so many people taking part.
“bound book / back bent” – so lovely.
“as if the words were to heavy” – hooted out loud at the pleasure of that image. Fantastic closing line.
your pleasure of the words makes my heart smile…