14 thoughts on “comment poem, add your words

  1. M.L. Gallagher

    to countthe cost of friendshipfoundupon the sandsof timedriftingendlesslyentwinedis to lose countof friendshipfoundbetweenfriendsarms entwinedupon the sandsof time drifting by.

  2. David K Wheeler

    now take, and takefind a placethat, till I wake,can hold the lightthat shines for days;and, if you must,pack it away.be sure to post a signso we'll know just what to findthe hour we choose to rise.

  3. betweenhearts75

    If it is light that I see in your eyesmay I hold the beauty within my owncasting the reflection upward into darkened nightsto fill the black void with starsthat whisper back to usthat we are all worthyenough to feelthe presencethat can brighten,enlighten the heartin the essence,unfolding before our eyeslight in the shadow of skies,that speaks infinitely to the soulof true love.

  4. Big Sur Blogisphere

    Laurayour eyes light up with loveas we reunite day or nightno words or assurances neededjust seeing you makes it alrightholding hands on our evening walkstogether as we gaze upon the moonstrolling easily, gentle with our talkkeeping it real, no need to swoonThere is warmth in our anticipationFor the golden days yet to comeI'll value our myriad journeysUntil I'm wrinkled, old and done.

  5. Maureen

    within your eyessafe hold my lightthen count the starsinto the night before the moon let slip from sight and ever more in thoughtdelight the cost isnotto love


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