14 thoughts on “comment poem, add your words”

1. M.L. Gallagher March 1, 2011 at 8:32 pm

   to countthe cost of friendshipfoundupon the sandsof timedriftingendlesslyentwinedis to lose countof friendshipfoundbetweenfriendsarms entwinedupon the sandsof time drifting by.
2. Kat Mortensen February 28, 2011 at 2:29 pm

   the fight—the battle for yourbleeding heartthe one you ripped apart in your rushto fill the voidwith mattersonly you couldundertandand time stood stillas only time can
3. S. Etole February 28, 2011 at 1:03 pm

   the starsthat countedslipped into the nightand lovelost
4. Bradley J February 28, 2011 at 12:46 pm

   Stars like little pings of dustraining down inwavesor is it merising upfloating through the eons of space, time,and the last thingI rememberbefore I found you.
5. krys kirkpatrick February 28, 2011 at 10:29 am

   I lay my back against your chest, we curl into each other…as the slumber blessed we greet the sweet surrender
6. David K Wheeler February 28, 2011 at 1:25 am

   now take, and takefind a placethat, till I wake,can hold the lightthat shines for days;and, if you must,pack it away.be sure to post a signso we'll know just what to findthe hour we choose to rise.
7. betweenhearts75 February 27, 2011 at 9:33 pm

   If it is light that I see in your eyesmay I hold the beauty within my owncasting the reflection upward into darkened nightsto fill the black void with starsthat whisper back to usthat we are all worthyenough to feelthe presencethat can brighten,enlighten the heartin the essence,unfolding before our eyeslight in the shadow of skies,that speaks infinitely to the soulof true love.
8. Big Sur Blogisphere February 27, 2011 at 8:54 pm

   Laurayour eyes light up with loveas we reunite day or nightno words or assurances neededjust seeing you makes it alrightholding hands on our evening walkstogether as we gaze upon the moonstrolling easily, gentle with our talkkeeping it real, no need to swoonThere is warmth in our anticipationFor the golden days yet to comeI'll value our myriad journeysUntil I'm wrinkled, old and done.
9. Tricia/treedy82 February 27, 2011 at 8:51 pm

   But night comes To us all in timethe light remains within your souland I in the starslive onin your love
10. Melissa February 27, 2011 at 8:39 pm

    who knewI would find you herelooking upface to the lightnot countingon anything at allradiant in love thatcounts no cost
11. Glynn February 27, 2011 at 8:30 pm

    Can we count the stars?Can we countthe grains of sandon the beach?Can we countthe love showereddown upon us?
12. B. Meandering February 27, 2011 at 8:23 pm

    when the noon hourbreaks forthand the light within begins to sputterhold steadythe truthHis loveis worth the costof all
13. Sandra Heska King February 27, 2011 at 8:05 pm

    and when the sunexplodes the nightand moon and starsdissolveand melodiesof praise resoundwithin your hearthold close my lightthe costis worthit all
14. Maureen February 27, 2011 at 7:27 pm

    within your eyessafe hold my lightthen count the starsinto the night before the moon let slip from sight and ever more in thoughtdelight the cost isnotto love