~
there’s a song
in me
somewhere
that’s ready to sing
there’s a gift
inside
that’s hiding
words
not meant for
rhyming
rhythm
needing
the right timing
i know
it’s there
i feel
it’s beat
getting stronger
but
how
much longer
will it be
before i
see
~
for one shot wednesday, week twenty-two,
at one stop poetry – where poets writers and artist meet.
write your poem – and leave the link here.
A LITTLE SOMETHIN' 
Ok I love the picture.. and your words I adore… ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
GO ahead and sing…retrieval
the right timing for the rhythm..that's a beautiful picture i can identify with..nice
Love this. Much.
I really like this.
a comforting rhythm to your words …
Ah, I have such a hard time with this sort of thing. This waiting thing.This part especially got me:"rhythmneedingthe right timing"
Hi, nancy. I think your song sings already. maybe it marches to the beat of a different drum? beautiful because of that strange rhythm.
Magnificent…Succinct..striking.. and amazing flow…I feel glad to savour the flavour of your poetry..Regards~ Sayandeep
I often feel that way too Nance. This is a beautiful song in itself.
Sums up you and words quite accurately. I like the lilt to this.
The brevity of the words adds a hesitant quality that lends itself well to the entire piece.A dandy One Shot, nance marie!
delicate…! and you maintained an amazing flow..great one shot!
Strikes an excellent balance between minimal lines and effective cadence. Smooth lines. Nice One Shot!