there’s a song
that’s ready to sing
there’s a gift
not meant for
the right timing
will it be
for one shot wednesday, week twenty-two,
at one stop poetry – where poets writers and artist meet.
write your poem – and leave the link here.
Ok I love the picture.. and your words I adore… ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
GO ahead and sing…retrieval
the right timing for the rhythm..that's a beautiful picture i can identify with..nice
Love this. Much.
I really like this.
a comforting rhythm to your words …
Ah, I have such a hard time with this sort of thing. This waiting thing.This part especially got me:"rhythmneedingthe right timing"
Hi, nancy. I think your song sings already. maybe it marches to the beat of a different drum? beautiful because of that strange rhythm.
Magnificent…Succinct..striking.. and amazing flow…I feel glad to savour the flavour of your poetry..Regards~ Sayandeep
I often feel that way too Nance. This is a beautiful song in itself.
Sums up you and words quite accurately. I like the lilt to this.
The brevity of the words adds a hesitant quality that lends itself well to the entire piece.A dandy One Shot, nance marie!
delicate…! and you maintained an amazing flow..great one shot!
Strikes an excellent balance between minimal lines and effective cadence. Smooth lines. Nice One Shot!