a comet in orbit
his tail he shakes
leaving a trail of stardust
in his wake
before dawn
meteors fly
caught in view
by the naked eye





for Percy the stardust doggie

16 thoughts on “radiant

  1. Owen

    Now, I have to admit, I didn’t get ‘dog’ without reading the comments, though it was lovely just the same. Now that I know it’s about a dog I can’t stop smiling.


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