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  1. Glynn says:

    Dark sky bigness, too,full of stars, and rain.Does life endwhen mourning begins,or is it morning yet?

  2. S. Etole says:

    what a morning that will be …

  3. Brian Miller says:

    those last 2 lines speak volumes…of truth

  4. where life begins…Nice.

  5. I especially like the last two verses, but overall it's a lovely poem. I also want to thank you for following me. It's nice to have such a gifted person towering up with words and photography next to my humble blog.

  6. Maureen says:

    The lack of punctuation allows one to read the lines in different ways; I like that.

  7. dustus says:

    Great cadence and smooth, short lines. Nice write!

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