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big sky darkness
you can see the stars here
in the purple desert
the earth rotates around us
as time meets it’s maker
mourning ends
where life begins
poem for one shoot sunday poetry challenge hosted by one stop poetry
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A LITTLE SOMETHIN'
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big sky darkness
you can see the stars here
in the purple desert
the earth rotates around us
as time meets it’s maker
mourning ends
where life begins
poem for one shoot sunday poetry challenge hosted by one stop poetry
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The Beautiful Due
Artful Words to Inspire Everyday Living
Daily short takes from an Appalachian hollow
A LITTLE SOMETHIN' 
Dark sky bigness, too,full of stars, and rain.Does life endwhen mourning begins,or is it morning yet?
what a morning that will be …
those last 2 lines speak volumes…of truth
where life begins…Nice.
I especially like the last two verses, but overall it's a lovely poem. I also want to thank you for following me. It's nice to have such a gifted person towering up with words and photography next to my humble blog.
The lack of punctuation allows one to read the lines in different ways; I like that.
Great cadence and smooth, short lines. Nice write!